Sunday, September 19, 2010

Lighted Curve

Lighted Curve!
Originally uploaded by gugolastico

I still can´t believe we are here.
Night crawled up to the sky, but still the lights thru the window remind me that we are still in this world, in this city... but together.

You are sleeping now that this bus is quiet.
To be honest, I can´t sleep... I mean, how could I sleep when I am still so overwhelmed because of all the things we said, of how much we grew together during this trip and how good it feels just to be sitting here next to you?

You are sleeping, but still you´re holding my hand.
Don´t let me go...

I look outside the window, a lot of cars, a lot of lights... a lot of lives out there. Lives we don´t know, lives that do not know ours, and I smile.
I hope they could know how much you mean to me, I hope they could see how beautiful this moment is.
And I hope you know it because, after all, it is all about you... it is possible because we are here together, because you are next to me.

Photo: Gugo
Story: Lu Ann


steveroni said...

Honest, Lu Ann and Gugo! No intention
was it mine to use your title in any way. I'll leave it up b/c it is only a post, but if apologies are needed, you have mine! OK?

Like your new blog colors, and one click brings photo of 15-second exposure right up front. Maybe you're glad the bus trip is over? A bed is nicer? Ooops! Didn't mean to get personal.

HEY!!! Am I the first comment on your newbie???

Lu Ann said...

Steve: OF COURSE you do not need to apologize! I was just saying that it is very funny how we wrote things like this in the same day.

:) Ha no... the bus was alright.
YES you are the first :)

Jingle said...

this is very refreshing!

Jingle said...

awards for you.
keep them or share, up to you.

Jingle said...

light curve, live the line.

Happy Potluck,


Marbles in My Pocket said...

Beautiful, visual write! Well done!

Ann LeFlore said...

So well done and so visual thank you so much

Morning said...

he loves you, it is evident.

Thanks for sharing.

Shashi said...

Its great verse.. full of feelings of the moment... and living in the now... I could relate to this..
Loved your lines..
"You are sleeping, but still you´re holding my hand.
Don´t let me go..."

Thanks for sharing. Look forward to your entry in the coming poetry picnic week 8 theme “Friends, relationship… ”


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